Fix link color weirdness, wording tweaks

src/components/NavItem.svelte

@@ -34,6 +34,7 @@
 
   a {
     text-decoration: none;
+    color: #fff;
   }
 
   .navItem[aria-current] {

src/routes/about-contact/+page.svelte

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
         communications, anywhere on earth. FemtoStar Project members own and
         operate FemtoStar Inc., a Canadian corporation tasked with the ownership,
         maintenance, and operation of the FemtoStar
-        satellite constellation. However, development of the hardware and
+        satellite constellation. The FemtoStar Project's development of the hardware and
         software that make FemtoStar possible is undertaken by our global
         community of volunteer developers with experience ranging from embedded
         hardware, to secure telecommunications, to software development, to

src/routes/faq/+page.svelte

@@ -221,9 +221,9 @@
           transmit your own short pieces of data over the network, with payment
           in Bitcoin. While Blockstream does allow for remote access to the
           Bitcoin blockchain, it is a one-way system - it cannot be used for
-          two-way communications, or to make online cryptocurrency transactions,
+          two-way communications, or even to send (as opposed to simply observe)
-          unless you already have an internet connection and can connect to its
+          cryptocurrency transactions, unless you already have an internet connection
-          API.
+          and can connect to its API.
         </p>
 
         <p>
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@
         <p>
           We're big fans of a number of the terrestrial privacy-respecting
           communications projects currently in development - in fact, what is now FemtoStar
-          <a href="./about-contact">began in concept as a terrestrial system</a>,
+          began in concept as a terrestrial system,
           which we then called Private Mobile Data Protocol (PMDP).
         </p>
 
@@ -328,10 +328,9 @@
           milliseconds familiar to users of geostationary satellite networks.
         </p>
         <p>
-          In general, latency via low-earth orbit satellite networks, with the possible
+          In general, latency via low-earth orbit satellite networks, including FemtoStar,
-          exception of some narrowband services, is comparable to that of terrestrial
+          is comparable to that of terrestrial mobile networks, and is generally
-          mobile networks, and is generally unproblematic for most applications. This
+          unproblematic for most applications. 
-          goes for FemtoStar as well.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
 
@@ -348,15 +347,15 @@
         <p>
           In addition to this, while the exact orbital parameters of the final
           constellation are undecided at this time, the requirement to launch
-          via typical rideshare missions usually entails deployment at orbits generally
+          via typical rideshare missions generally entails deployment at orbits typically
           considered sufficiently self-cleaning to accomodate satellites without
           any onboard propulsion at all, causing them to eventually re-enter simply
-          due to atmospheric drag. While satellites used in the constellation may
+          due to atmospheric drag. While satellites used in the constellation are likely to
-          raise their orbits somewhat after deployment, any satellites not intended
+          raise their orbits somewhat after deployment, any satellites not raising
-          to station-keep within the final constellation and so possibly deployed
+          their orbit into the final constellation (such a satellite that
-          without onboard propulsion (such as possible early test versions) would
+          experienced a propulsion failure during launch, or an early test satellite
-          simply remain at their deployed altitude and re-enter due to atmospheric
+          without propulsion) would simply remain at their deployed altitude and,
-          drag like a typical smallsat.
+          at end-of-life, re-enter due to atmospheric drag like a typical smallsat.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
 
@@ -365,12 +364,13 @@
       >
         <p>
           The network can theoretically work with as little as a single
-          satellite, however of course this configuration does not allow for
+          satellite, however of course this configuration does not allow for a
+          stationary user to receive
           continuous coverage. Practical constellation layouts begin at around
           48 satellites (and include the layout shown on our <a href="./"
             >homepage</a
-          >). We have also considered the possibility of starting with a larger
+          >). We have considered the possibility of a larger
-          constellation of up to 96 satellites, however we believe the most
+          constellation of up to 96 satellites, however we believe that the most
           reasonable approach would be to begin with the minimum practical
           number of satellites (likely 48) and then scale up the constellation
           with new satellites as needed.
@@ -381,18 +381,18 @@
         title="What if a satellite fails? Will the network become unreliable?"
       >
         <p>
-          The FemtoStar network provides multiple levels of protection against
+          The FemtoStar network is designed to provide multiple levels of protection against
-          failure of spacecraft, and against failure of the network due to
+          failure of spacecraft, and against failure of the network due to the
           failure of a spacecraft, resulting in a resilient network able to
           mitigate and work around hardware failures onboard satellites. Each
           satellite incorporates a degree of redundancy previously seen only on
           far larger satellites, and is designed with longevity in mind. The
-          network as a whole also protects against network-wide failure as a
+          network as a whole also protects against network-wide unreliability as a
-          result of the failure of a single satellite - most regions, especially
+          result of the failure of a single satellite - in the intended constellation, most regions, especially
           those with a latitude near the inclination of the satellites (such as
           North America, Europe, Oceania, and much of Asia and South America)
           are covered redundantly, and even elsewhere, the "gap" caused when
-          the only satellite visible to a user has failed is short - lasting
+          the only satellite visible to a user has failed is usually short - lasting
           only minutes or less before working satellites come into view.
         </p>
 
@@ -400,8 +400,8 @@
           For many users, a satellite failure would likely be noticeable only as
           a decrease in the network's coverage angle, while for those in the
           aforementioned near-inclination regions, it might not be noticeable at
-          all. Finally, FemtoStar would be able to rapidly and inexpensively
+          all. Finally, we would be able to rapidly and inexpensively
-          replenish its network with new satellites, either newly-launched or
+          replenish the network with new satellites, either newly-launched or
           simply moved into place if already available in a storage orbit.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
@@ -422,18 +422,19 @@
           be a number of FemtoStar terminals installed as a part of
           machine-to-machine data installations, as backup connections for
           enterprise networks, or as backhaul to community-run terrestrial
-          networks. A user using it for privacy reasons is indistinguishable
+          networks. A user using it because of its privacy features is indistinguishable
           from any of these users.
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          Additionally, by this rationale, any privacy-respecting product,
+          Additionally, by this logic, using any privacy-respecting product,
-          service, or system is bad for your privacy, as its use demonstrates
+          service, or system is counterproductive, as its use might indicate
-          that you are looking for privacy. Even if your threat model truly does
+          that you are looking for privacy. This isn't how nearly anyone actually
+          thinks about protecting their privacy. Even if your threat model truly does
           require that you obscure even the fact that someone is using a system
           that could be used for privacy-respecting communications, FemtoStar
           still does substantially better than just about any other
-          privacy-respecting communications network. For one thing, it uses a
+          privacy-respecting communications network. For one thing, a FemtoStar terminal uses a
           substantially more directional antenna than any terrestrial mobile network,
           which means its transmitted signal is very weak in any direction but
           that of the satellite.
@@ -493,7 +494,7 @@
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          A FemtoStar terminal could theoretically as a receive-only device if this
+          A FemtoStar terminal could theoretically function as a receive-only device if this
           is acceptable for the user's use case - in this configuration, it
           would likely be nearly impossible to geolocate, even with this sort of
           attack.

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