diff --git a/src/components/Footer.svelte b/src/components/Footer.svelte
index f5fda0e..88a9c8c 100644
--- a/src/components/Footer.svelte
+++ b/src/components/Footer.svelte
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 <div class="footer-container">
   <FemtoStarLogo height={42} width={33} color="#FFFFFF75" />
   <div class="footer-text">
-      Copyright 2024 - <a href="https://matrix.to/#/!COEHOXujBzfAHAVzPG:matrix.org">Matrix</a> / <a href="https://git.femtostar.com">GitLab</a> / <a href="https://twitter.com/FemtoStar">X</a>
+      Copyright 2024 - <a href="https://matrix.to/#/!COEHOXujBzfAHAVzPG:matrix.org">Matrix</a> / <a href="https://git.femtostar.com">Git</a> / <a href="https://twitter.com/FemtoStar">X</a>
   </div>
 </div>
 
diff --git a/src/components/Nav.svelte b/src/components/Nav.svelte
index 677a863..ac9e913 100644
--- a/src/components/Nav.svelte
+++ b/src/components/Nav.svelte
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@
   <div class="dropdown">
     <div
       class="dropdown-name"
-      class:bold={segment === "global-open-infrastructure" ||
-        segment === "privacy-by-design" ||
-        segment === "free-open-source"}
+      class:bold={$page.url.pathname === "/global-open-infrastructure" ||
+        $page.url.pathname === "/privacy-by-design" ||
+        $page.url.pathname === "/free-open-source"}
     >
       more
     </div>
@@ -41,16 +41,16 @@
 
       <NavItem
         {segment}
-        href="./privacy-by-design"
-        matchingSegment="/privacy-by-design"
-        humanName="privacy by design"
+        href="./free-open-source"
+        matchingSegment="/free-open-source"
+        humanName="free and open-source"
       />
 
       <NavItem
         {segment}
-        href="./free-open-source"
-        matchingSegment="/free-open-source"
-        humanName="free and open-source"
+        href="./privacy-by-design"
+        matchingSegment="/privacy-by-design"
+        humanName="privacy by design"
       />
     </div>
   </div>
@@ -82,6 +82,7 @@
     justify-content: center;
     align-items: center;
     cursor: default;
+    /*font-weight: bold;*/
   }
 
   .bold {
diff --git a/src/routes/+page.svelte b/src/routes/+page.svelte
index 47b817b..bbf2936 100644
--- a/src/routes/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/+page.svelte
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
     <TalkingPointName text="Global Open Infrastructure" />
     <TalkingPointContent>
       <p>
-        Our satellites are open infrastructure - that means anyone can use them
+        FemtoStar satellites are open infrastructure - that means anyone can use them
         without needing to go through an official gateway. This makes FemtoStar
         a flexible, open, and inherently net-neutral network, able not just to
         connect users to the services we provide, but to serve as a platform for
@@ -45,21 +45,6 @@
     </TalkingPointContent>
   </TalkingPointContainer>
 
-  <TalkingPointContainer>
-    <TalkingPointName text="Privacy by design, not just by promise" />
-    <TalkingPointContent>
-      <p>
-        Many products only promise privacy. FemtoStar is different. Privacy and
-        security are verifiably baked into every part of the system, all the way
-        down to the lowest level details. We couldn't violate your privacy even
-        if we wanted to.
-      </p>
-      <p>
-        <a rel="prefetch" href="./privacy-by-design">Learn more →</a>
-      </p>
-    </TalkingPointContent>
-  </TalkingPointContainer>
-
   <TalkingPointContainer>
     <TalkingPointName
       text="Free and open-source technology, built by a global community"
@@ -78,6 +63,22 @@
     </TalkingPointContent>
   </TalkingPointContainer>
 
+  <TalkingPointContainer>
+    <TalkingPointName text="Privacy by design, not just by promise" />
+    <TalkingPointContent>
+      <p>
+        Many products merely promise privacy. FemtoStar is different. Privacy and
+        security are baked into every part of the system, all the way
+        down to the lowest level details. Unlike any other wide-area telecommunications network,
+        FemtoStar offers verifiable guarantees that user privacy is unconditionally
+        protected.
+      </p>
+      <p>
+        <a rel="prefetch" href="./privacy-by-design">Learn more →</a>
+      </p>
+    </TalkingPointContent>
+  </TalkingPointContainer>
+
   <PartnerContainer />
 </div>
 
diff --git a/src/routes/about-contact/+page.svelte b/src/routes/about-contact/+page.svelte
index b9fa517..be7e2e2 100644
--- a/src/routes/about-contact/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/about-contact/+page.svelte
@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@
       <p>
         The FemtoStar Project is a global community of developers working
         towards one common goal - better, more open, and more private
-        communications, anywhere on earth. At the core of the FemtoStar Project
-        is FemtoStar Inc., a Canadian corporation wholly owned by FemtoStar
-        Project members and tasked with ownership and operation of the FemtoStar
+        communications, anywhere on earth. FemtoStar Project members own and
+        operate FemtoStar Inc., a Canadian corporation tasked with the ownership,
+        maintenance, and operation of the FemtoStar
         satellite constellation. However, development of the hardware and
-        software that make FemtoStar possible is undertaken by a global
+        software that make FemtoStar possible is undertaken by our global
         community of volunteer developers with experience ranging from embedded
         hardware, to secure telecommunications, to software development, to
         aerospace.
@@ -46,28 +46,34 @@
           website or of our satellite, then dot com. </span>h<span class="c">
         </span>e<span class="c">Lorem</span>l<span class="j">ipsum</span>l<span class="c">dolor</span>o<span class="c">sit</span> а<span class="c">amet</span>t
         f<span class="c">consectetur</span>e<span class="j">adipiscing</span>m<span class="c">elit</span>t<span class="c">Sed</span>o<span class="j">dolor</span>s<span class="c">sem</span>t<span class="c">lacinia</span>a<span class="c">ac</span>r
-        d<span class="c">euismod</span>о<span class="j">vitae</span>t c<span class="c">hendrerit</span>o<span class="j">sit</span>m (if you have Tutanota, you can send end-to-end encrypted mail here too).
+        d<span class="c">euismod</span>о<span class="j">vitae</span>t c<span class="c">hendrerit</span>o<span class="j">sit</span>m.
       </p>
     </TalkingPointContent>
   </TalkingPointContainer>
 
+  <!--
+  
+   this section was severely out-of-date and is now entirely duplicative of information also
+   on the FAQ page - it's been commented out for now, but could return if someone cares
+   to rewrite it
+  
   <TalkingPointContainer>
     <TalkingPointName text="History" />
     <TalkingPointContent>
       <p>
-        Development of what is now FemtoStar began with a project named Private
+        Development of what is now FemtoStar began with a concept named Private
         Mobile Data Protocol (PMDP). While PMDP was intended to be a terrestrial
         network, many of the design elements now used in the FemtoStar Protocol
         were initially designed for this project. A series of tests in
         real-world urban and suburban environments throughout 2019 led to the
         conclusion that, without a dense network and an impractically large
-        number of towers, reasonable coverage, even only at low speeds and only
+        number of towers, providing reasonable coverage, even if only at low speeds and only
         within city centers, was impractical with a license-free terrestrial
         network.
       </p>
 
       <p>
-        In early 2020, the decision was made to research the implementation of a
+        In early 2020, we decided to research the implementation of a
         PMDP-like network in a Mobile Satellite Service (MSS) system. While
         Mobile Satellite Service hardware (such as satellite phones, portable
         satellite internet terminals, and machine-to-machine/IoT satellite data
@@ -79,21 +85,21 @@
       </p>
 
       <p>
-        Within a month, a basic plan had been developed, and many of the
-        remaining problems of the PMDP protocol (such as its lack of any
-        mechanism for payment for service) had been solved. The core of the
-        proposed network was a constellation of very small communications
-        satellites - a design we named FemtoStar.
+        By mid-2020, a plan had been developed, and many of the
+        remaining problems of PMDP (such as its lack of any mechanism for payment
+        for service, without which "free" DDoS attacks on the network would have
+        been possible) had been solved. The core of the proposed network was now
+        a constellation of very small communications satellites - a design we
+        named FemtoStar.
       </p>
 
       <p>
-        As the FemtoStar Project grew, development continued throughout 2020. In
-        2021, FemtoStar Inc. was incorporated in Canada as an entity to own and
+        In 2021, FemtoStar Inc. was incorporated in Canada as an entity to own and
         operate the FemtoStar satellite constellation on behalf of the FemtoStar
-        Project.
+        Project. 
       </p>
     </TalkingPointContent>
-  </TalkingPointContainer>
+  </TalkingPointContainer>-->
 </div>
 
 <style>
diff --git a/src/routes/donate/+page.svelte b/src/routes/donate/+page.svelte
index 8dbbe11..d6a95ab 100644
--- a/src/routes/donate/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/donate/+page.svelte
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
       <TalkingPointName text="Donations" />
       <TalkingPointContent>
         <p>
-            The FemtoStar Project is a community of volunteers funded by a grant from our partner NLnet,
-            out-of-pocket by some of our members, and from donations by our community. Nobody is required
+            The FemtoStar Project is a community of volunteers, to date funded primarily out-of-pocket by some of our members,
+            and from donations by our community. Nobody is required
             to donate, and we currently don't have much in terms of perks for donors, but if you'd like to see
             this project succeed and are able to, consider throwing a few dollars our way or setting up
             a recurring donation through Liberapay.
@@ -31,9 +31,16 @@
         <TalkingPointName text="Donate via PayPal" />
         <TalkingPointContent>
             <p>
-                Via PayPal, we accept both one-time donations directly via PayPal, and recurring donations via Liberapay
+                We accept both one-time donations directly via PayPal, and recurring donations via Liberapay
                 (processed using PayPal).
             </p>
+            <p>
+                Since PayPal required our account to belong to a specific legal entity, PayPal
+                donations go to FemtoStar Inc., and are used to purchase components and produce prototype hardware for
+                use by the FemtoStar Project. FemtoStar Inc. is owned and operated entirely by FemtoStar Project volunteers,
+                and exists to assist the FemtoStar Project in production of hardware, and in ownership and operation of the
+                FemtoStar Network (see <a href="/faq">our FAQ</a> for further details).
+            </p>
             <p>
                 <b>PayPal (one-time donation):</b> <a href="https://www.paypal.com/donate/?hosted_button_id=M2N5N2B624CNQ&source=url">Click Here</a>
             </p>
@@ -51,10 +58,15 @@
                 one of the following addresses.
             </p>
             <p>
-                <b>Bitcoin:</b> <span class="crypto-address">bc1qnytm8arpuz247622yef070nvxx56qp6dqwl80s</span>
+                These addresses go to wallets controlled by a group of core FemtoStar Project volunteers. Donations to them are used to cover
+                hosting and domain costs, purchase hardware and tools, and otherwise support FemtoStar Project development
+                directly.
             </p>
             <p>
-                <b>Monero:</b> <span class="crypto-address">83YcY9dsxARYkS4AaKVNkEJTLMQnuvuzSSij9vC7SqU7eriCpHHBsrs2ijKE6MQjobUShY4D2kjQTZ3XXp7WMtR7PdjKrx9</span>
+                <b>Bitcoin:</b> <span class="crypto-address"><a target="_blank" href="bitcoin:bc1qnytm8arpuz247622yef070nvxx56qp6dqwl80s?label=FemtoStar%20Donation">bc1qnytm8arpuz247622yef070nvxx56qp6dqwl80s</a></span>
+            </p>
+            <p>
+                <b>Monero:</b> <span class="crypto-address"><a target="_blank" href="monero:86EMaQV5nfKMZ8HowG9RTugLdu7tV8MqgHvTvV2qwXEsXAMBMVZMQ2AgwsKhxqZEiM8nTruWPrp6YcdvAv4WveiXFSTbRnu?tx_description=FemtoStar%20Donation">86EMaQV5nfKMZ8HowG9RTugLdu7tV8MqgHvTvV2qwXEsXAMBMVZMQ2AgwsKhxqZEiM8nTruWPrp6YcdvAv4WveiXFSTbRnu</a></span>
             </p>
         </TalkingPointContent>
     </TalkingPointContainer>
@@ -64,8 +76,9 @@
       <TalkingPointContent>
         <p>
           If you would like to donate via a method not listed above (such as via
-          a different payment processor or in a different cryptocurrency), please
-          <a href="about-contact/">contact us</a> and we'd be glad to help set something up.
+          a different payment processor or in a different cryptocurrency), or if you
+          want more information before you donate, please
+          <a href="about-contact/">contact us</a> and we'd be glad to help you.
         </p>
       </TalkingPointContent>
     </TalkingPointContainer>
diff --git a/src/routes/faq/+page.svelte b/src/routes/faq/+page.svelte
index 42dcfc6..ea30cdb 100644
--- a/src/routes/faq/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/faq/+page.svelte
@@ -56,14 +56,14 @@
       </FAQItem>
 
       <FAQItem title="Who makes FemtoStar terminals?">
-        FemtoStar plans to take a hybrid approach to manufacturing and selling
-        terminals. FemtoStar's higher-sales-volume "core" user terminals will be
+        The FemtoStar Project intends to take a hybrid approach to terminal
+        manufacturing and sales. Higher-volume "core" user terminals will be
         manufactured and sold primarily by hardware partners, allowing us to
         leverage existing manufacturing and sales infrastructure. Meanwhile,
         development and reference hardware, as well as more specialized
-        terminals will be made in Canada by FemtoStar, at the same facility
-        where we build our satellites. Every FemtoStar terminal is based on
-        FemtoStar-developed reference designs.
+        terminals will be made in Canada by FemtoStar Inc., at the same facility
+        where build our satellites. Every FemtoStar terminal is based on
+        FemtoStar Project-developed reference designs.
       </FAQItem>
 
       <FAQItem title="What speeds do you anticipate being available?">
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
           BGAN, Iridium Certus, or Thuraya IP. In these services, as in
           FemtoStar, designing for this middle category means that users can
           expect performance much better than a narrowband system, while still
-          having a portable terminal much smaller than those needed for
+          having a truly-portable terminal much smaller than those needed for
           broadband systems. Like the aforementioned MSS options, a typical
           FemtoStar terminal should provide in the mid-hundreds of kbps, using a
           terminal roughly the size of a tablet or small laptop.
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
           Of course, FemtoStar's design still allows for flexibility on the size
           and speed of terminals - users should be able to choose their own
           balance between speed, cost, and portability. As such, depending on
-          the size of the terminal, FemtoStar should be able to accomodate
+          the size of the terminal, the FemtoStar network should be able to accomodate
           larger terminals in the megabits-per-second range, or smaller
           terminals with reduced (if still better than typical narrowband
           offerings) speeds in a pocket-sized form factor.
@@ -103,29 +103,58 @@
 
       <FAQItem title="Is the FemtoStar Credit Token a cryptocurrency?">
         <p>
-          No, at least not by any usual definition of the term. While they are a
+          No, at least not by any usual definition of the term. While the Credit Token system is a
           digital system used to pay for service, and while they do make use of
           cryptographic signatures for security, FemtoStar Credit Tokens are not
           transacted on a blockchain, cannot be mined, and are not intended for
-          use as anything other than payment for FemtoStar service. While
-          third-party users are free to buy and sell Credit Tokens at any price
-          they are able to, their value in FemtoStar service is fixed.
+          use as anything other than payment for FemtoStar service.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
 
       <FAQItem title="How do I buy FemtoStar tokens? Are they available yet?">
         <p>
           Once our network is operational, you will be able to purchase
-          FemtoStar tokens from FemtoStar via a retail token sales portal, from
-          a third-party reseller, in bulk from FemtoStar via a wholesale
-          agreement, or from anyone else willing to sell them to you. While the
-          FemtoStar Project is capable of pre-issuing tokens that will be usable
-          once the network is operational, we do not currently offer pre-issued
-          retail tokens to the general public, due to the inherent risk to
+          FemtoStar tokens from FemtoStar Inc. via a retail token sales portal, from
+          a third-party reseller, or in bulk via a wholesale
+          agreement. While FemtoStar Inc. would be capable of pre-issuing tokens that would be usable
+          once the network was operational, they are not yet available for sale, due to the inherent risk to
           consumers of purchasing a service before it is available. If you are
-          interested in working with us to purchase wholesale tokens, for resale
+          interested in working with FemtoStar Inc.
           as a token reseller or for a large deployment of FemtoStar hardware as
-          an enterprise user, please <a href="./about-contact">contact us</a>.
+          an enterprise user, please contact 
+
+          <span class="j">This address has been hidden to prevent spam being received. If you are reading this website as plain text or through a screen reader, the correct address is the word inc, that's I. N. C., then the symbol spelled with the letter before B and then the letter after S, then the name of this
+            website or of our satellite, then dot com. </span>i<span class="c">
+          </span><span class="c">Lorem</span>n<span class="j">ipsum</span><span class="c">dolor</span>c<span class="c">sit</span> а<span class="c">amet</span>t
+          f<span class="c">consectetur</span>e<span class="j">adipiscing</span>m<span class="c">elit</span>t<span class="c">Sed</span>o<span class="j">dolor</span>s<span class="c">sem</span>t<span class="c">lacinia</span>a<span class="c">ac</span>r
+          d<span class="c">euismod</span>о<span class="j">vitae</span>t c<span class="c">hendrerit</span>o<span class="j">sit</span>m.
+
+        </p>
+      </FAQItem>
+
+      <FAQItem title="Who is the FemtoStar Project? Who is FemtoStar Inc.?">
+        <p>
+          The FemtoStar Project is a global volunteer community of developers, working on
+          technology for global, open communications infrastructure. For more
+          information about the FemtoStar Project, or to contact us, see
+          <a href="./about-contact">about & contact</a>.
+        </p>
+        <p>
+          FemtoStar Inc., located in Canada, is the company tasked with the manufacturing
+          and operation of the FemtoStar satellite constellation, based on the free and
+          open-source designs and specifications developed and published by the FemtoStar
+          Project.
+        </p>
+        <p>
+          FemtoStar Inc. exists to provide the FemtoStar Project with an entity which
+          can manufacture the satellites, hold licenses for the constellation, purchase
+          services such as satellite launch or component fabrication, and can handle
+          the day-to-day operation of the constellation once operational. While
+          FemtoStar Inc. consists entirely of FemtoStar Project members, and exists
+          to manufacture and operate the system developed by the FemtoStar Project,
+          the FemtoStar Project is entirely independent of FemtoStar Inc., and its developments
+          are freely usable, even outside the context of the network operated by
+          FemtoStar Inc. 
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
     </TalkingPointContent>
@@ -139,11 +168,11 @@
           <a href="https://starlink.com">Starlink</a> is a low-earth-orbit communications
           constellation developed by SpaceX. While we have a tremendous amount of
           respect for the engineering accomplishments of the Starlink network, its
-          goals and those of FemtoStar are almost entirely separate. While both intend
+          goals and those of FemtoStar are largely separate. While both intend
           to provide satellite communications service using low-earth orbit constellations,
-          Starlink is designed to provide consumer broadband services to large, fixed
+          Starlink is designed primarily to provide consumer broadband services to large, fixed
           terminals (in the satellite industry, this is known as Fixed Satellite
-          Service). FemtoStar, on the other hand, is designed for midband services
+          Service). FemtoStar, on the other hand, is designed for truly-mobile midband services
           to small and medium, portable or in-motion terminals (also known as Mobile
           Satellite Service).
         </p>
@@ -164,16 +193,16 @@
 
         <p>
           Starlink terminals are uniquely identified on the network, and can be
-          easily geolocated by the network (whether they report their GPS
-          location is currently unknown, but the network is certainly able to
-          geolocate them accurately, as they are disallowed from accessing the
+          readily geolocated by the network, as they are often disallowed from accessing the
           network outside of the small region, or "cell", where their user's
-          address is registered). Starlink users are required to provide a
-          substantial amount of personal information in order to purchase
-          service. Payments are handled on ground infrastructure, based on user
-          accounts. FemtoStar does not require any user account whatsoever, is
-          not restricted to use in a small cell, and handles payments on the
-          satellite itself using FemtoStar Credit Tokens.
+          address is registered. Starlink users are required to provide a
+          significant amount of personal information in order to purchase
+          service, in line with traditional telecommunications services. Payments for service
+          are handled on ground infrastructure, based on user accounts, and generally
+          are not possible using privacy-respecting payment methods. FemtoStar users
+          do not require any user account whatsoever, and payments are handled on the satellite
+          itself using FemtoStar Credit Tokens. Geolocation of FemtoStar users by the FemtoStar
+          network is, by design, infeasible.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
 
@@ -222,9 +251,9 @@
       >
         <p>
           We're big fans of a number of the terrestrial privacy-respecting
-          communications projects currently in development - in fact, FemtoStar <a
-            href="./about-contact">began as a terrestrial network</a
-          >, named Private Mobile Data Protocol (PMDP).
+          communications projects currently in development - in fact, what is now FemtoStar
+          <a href="./about-contact">began in concept as a terrestrial system</a>,
+          which we then called Private Mobile Data Protocol (PMDP).
         </p>
 
         <p>
@@ -237,11 +266,12 @@
           > to build mainstream cellular networks out to their current coverage,
           and even with this it's likely you still sometimes have problems getting
           cellular service. We began with the assumption that a terrestrial network
-          would be the only practical solution, and extensively tested PMDP hardware
-          in real-world urban and suburban environments. Eventually, even we - the
-          developers of the technology - were forced to admit that it was impractical
-          without an impractically dense network, even for a small, urban implementation
-          - letalone regional or global coverage.
+          would be the only practical solution, and extensively tested a variety of 
+          popular license-free radio hardware - including LoRa, 802.11, and 802.15.4 transceivers -
+          in real-world urban and suburban environments. Eventually, we were forced to
+          admit that a workable community-operated mobile telecommunications network would be impractical
+          in all but the most densely-populated areas, and even there only with the
+          right combination of ideally-situated transceivers and minimal obstruction by structures.
         </p>
 
         <p>
@@ -250,10 +280,11 @@
           kilometer (3200 feet) away from somewhere a mesh node or base station
           in a community-run terrestrial network could be installed without
           being removed, stolen, or tampered with, and if anyone nearby would be
-          willing to pay for, install, and maintain such a device. We tried
-          this, with real hardware, in a real city, in 2019, and came to the
-          conclusion that that, in contrast to being an easier solution, it was
-          likely outright impossible in most circumstances.
+          willing to purchase, install, and maintain such a device. We installed a
+          series of LoRa transceivers in a real city in 2019 as a test of our PMDP
+          concept, mapped their coverage under a variety of conditions, and came to
+          the conclusion that that, rather than being an easier solution, such a 
+          network was likely outright impossible in most circumstances.
         </p>
 
         <p>
@@ -276,7 +307,7 @@
           extend coverage, this still does not allow for coverage where there
           are no nodes. The same thought experiment applies - are you always
           within a kilometer of someone else who might have a node in the mesh?
-          If you have your own node in the mesh, is there ever another node
+          If you have your own node in the mesh, is there often another node
           nearby for it to mesh with? If not, a mesh network may not be
           practical in your situation. Even where mesh networks are practical,
           FemtoStar could still be used to interconnect regions where the mesh
@@ -289,28 +320,43 @@
         title="I've used satellite internet, and the latency is pretty bad - is this true of FemtoStar too?"
       >
         <p>
-          Not to nearly the same degree. While the distance to the satellite
+          If the service you have used was via a geostationary network, then
+          not to nearly the same degree. While the distance to the satellite
           does add some amount of latency due to the time taken for the signal
           to reach the satellite, the round-trip propagation time to a low-earth
           orbit satellite is a handful of milliseconds, not the hundreds of
           milliseconds familiar to users of geostationary satellite networks.
-          Ping time on FemtoStar should be less than a tenth of that which a
-          geostationary satellite user would experience, if even that.
+        </p>
+        <p>
+          In general, latency via low-earth orbit satellite networks, with the possible
+          exception of some narrowband services, is comparable to that of terrestrial
+          mobile networks, and is generally unproblematic for most applications. This
+          goes for FemtoStar as well.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
 
       <FAQItem title="How do you plan to mitigate orbital debris?">
         <p>
           In contrast to the vast majority of small satellites, FemtoStar plans
-          to include electric propulsion onboard our satellites, allowing them
-          to be repositioned as needed and cleanly deorbited at end-of-life. The
-          FemtoStar Project is working closely with Applied Ion Systems, a
-          leading developer of open-hardware smallsat propulsion hardware, to
-          develop a specialized implementation of their technology for use
-          onboard the FemtoStar space vehicle. Even in the event of a thruster
-          failure, the solar panel can be positioned to drastically increase
-          atmospheric drag on the satellite, rapidly increasing orbital decay
-          and deorbiting the satellite.
+          to include electric propulsion onboard the satellites used in our
+          constellation, allowing them to be repositioned as needed and cleanly
+          deorbited at end-of-life. The FemtoStar Project is working closely with
+          Applied Ion Systems, a leading developer of open-hardware smallsat
+          propulsion hardware, to develop a specialized implementation of their
+          technology for use onboard our satellite.
+        </p>
+        <p>
+          In addition to this, while the exact orbital parameters of the final
+          constellation are undecided at this time, the requirement to launch
+          via typical rideshare missions usually entails deployment at orbits generally
+          considered sufficiently self-cleaning to accomodate satellites without
+          any onboard propulsion at all, causing them to eventually re-enter simply
+          due to atmospheric drag. While satellites used in the constellation may
+          raise their orbits somewhat after deployment, any satellites not intended
+          to station-keep within the final constellation and so possibly deployed
+          without onboard propulsion (such as possible early test versions) would
+          simply remain at their deployed altitude and re-enter due to atmospheric
+          drag like a typical smallsat.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
 
@@ -323,7 +369,7 @@
           continuous coverage. Practical constellation layouts begin at around
           48 satellites (and include the layout shown on our <a href="./"
             >homepage</a
-          >. We have also considered the possibility of starting with a larger
+          >). We have also considered the possibility of starting with a larger
           constellation of up to 96 satellites, however we believe the most
           reasonable approach would be to begin with the minimum practical
           number of satellites (likely 48) and then scale up the constellation
@@ -343,15 +389,15 @@
           far larger satellites, and is designed with longevity in mind. The
           network as a whole also protects against network-wide failure as a
           result of the failure of a single satellite - most regions, especially
-          those with a latitude near the inclination of the satellites such as
-          North America Europe, and Oceania, and much of Asia and South America
-          - are covered redundantly, and even elsewhere, the "gap" caused when
+          those with a latitude near the inclination of the satellites (such as
+          North America, Europe, Oceania, and much of Asia and South America)
+          are covered redundantly, and even elsewhere, the "gap" caused when
           the only satellite visible to a user has failed is short - lasting
           only minutes or less before working satellites come into view.
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          For most users, a satellite failure would likely be noticeable only as
+          For many users, a satellite failure would likely be noticeable only as
           a decrease in the network's coverage angle, while for those in the
           aforementioned near-inclination regions, it might not be noticeable at
           all. Finally, FemtoStar would be able to rapidly and inexpensively
@@ -388,19 +434,18 @@
           that could be used for privacy-respecting communications, FemtoStar
           still does substantially better than just about any other
           privacy-respecting communications network. For one thing, it uses a
-          substantially more directional antenna than any terrestrial mobile,
+          substantially more directional antenna than any terrestrial mobile network,
           which means its transmitted signal is very weak in any direction but
           that of the satellite.
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          Its connection to the satellite is also is encrypted, and even to the
-          satellite, it does not contain a location, terminal identifier, user
-          account, or any other identifying details. The terminal never
-          transmits when it has no session open with the satellite, and, unlike
-          mesh network nodes, it cannot be made to transmit by the traffic of
-          another user unless the terminal's owner has chosen to operate their
-          own service over the network.
+          A user's traffic to the satellite is also is encrypted, and never includes
+          a location, terminal identifier, user account, or any other identifying
+          details about the user. The terminal never transmits when it has no session open with
+          the satellite, and, unlike mesh network nodes, it cannot be made to transmit
+          by the traffic of another user unless the terminal's owner has chosen to
+          operate their own service over the network.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
 
@@ -408,20 +453,16 @@
         title="Don't FemtoStar's satellites have to know where I am, based on which beam I use?"
       >
         <p>
-          In theory, to some extent, but in practice, not meaningfully. In
-          contrast to traditional communications satellites, a FemtoStar
-          satellite, at least for transmit, does not have a consistent beam
-          pattern. Instead, electronic beamforming is used to point each of only
-          a handful of beams, rapidly switching beam patterns as the satellite
-          jumps between active sessions. The footprints within which these beams
-          are usable are hundreds of kilometers across, even at their narrowest,
-          and more than 2000 kilometers long. In addition, knowing where "you"
-          are, as opposed to just knowing the rough area in which one of the
-          network's users is located, requires knowing who you are. As such, the
-          satellite could determine that an anonymous session is within, for
-          example, northern Europe, western North America, or eastern Asia, but
-          not that it is in a particular country or city, and certainly not who
-          that session belongs to.
+          In theory, to some extent, but in practice, not meaningfully. A FemtoStar
+          satellite has only a handful of beams in use at any given moment, and
+          the footprints within which these beams are usable are between 1000
+          and 4000 kilometers across each, depending on your coverage angle. In addition,
+          knowing where "you" are, as opposed to just knowing the rough area in which
+          one of the network's users is located, requires knowing who you are.
+          As such, the satellite could determine that an anonymous session is
+          within, for example, northern Europe, western North America, or eastern
+          Asia, but not that it is in a particular country or city, and certainly not
+          who that session belongs to.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
 
@@ -452,7 +493,7 @@
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          A FemtoStar terminal can even be used as a receive-only device if this
+          A FemtoStar terminal could theoretically as a receive-only device if this
           is acceptable for the user's use case - in this configuration, it
           would likely be nearly impossible to geolocate, even with this sort of
           attack.
@@ -491,15 +532,14 @@
       </FAQItem>
 
       <FAQItem
-        title="FemtoStar Inc. is Canadian - what if I don't trust Canada?"
+        title="What if I don't trust whatever place the FemtoStar Project is run from?"
       >
         <p>
           See the above point. Even if a malicious government were to take over
-          the FemtoStar Project and attempt to surveil its users, they would be
+          FemtoStar Inc., or some part of the development work under the FemtoStar
+          Project, and attempt to surveil the network's users, they would be
           incapable of doing so without making changes that would be immediately
           obvious to users, and to our own developers in other countries.
-          Additionally FemtoStar Inc. in Canada is only one part of the
-          overarching FemtoStar Project - we have developers all over the world.
         </p>
       </FAQItem>
 
@@ -515,18 +555,17 @@
           The most important point here is that FemtoStar satellites are not
           especially useful targets to an attacker. Due to not being a trusted
           part of the network, even if they themselves are fully compromised,
-          they cannot be used to compromise FemtoStar users, nor would they be
-          much use as part of a botnet, nor would they provide an attacker with
-          any additional utility in their intended purpose (communications) than
-          is available officially.
+          they cannot be used to compromise the security of FemtoStar users,
+          nor would they be much use as part of a botnet, nor would they provide
+          an attacker with any additional utility in their intended purpose
+          (communications) than would be available officially.
         </p>
 
         <p>
           With regards to compromising the satellites from the ground, the
           satellite's onboard software is subject to intense scrutiny, including
-          through formal proofs, makes extensive use of sandboxing, and, given
-          the relative simplicity of the FemtoStar protocol, presents a small
-          attack surface.
+          through formal proofs of critical components, and, given the relative
+          simplicity of the FemtoStar protocol, presents a small attack surface.
         </p>
 
         <p>
@@ -534,7 +573,7 @@
           infrastructure in orbit certainly grants it a degree of
           inaccessibility compared to terrestrial infrastructure, there are of
           course spacecraft which could conceivably reach a FemtoStar satellite,
-          and could hypothetically either tamper with or replace it. However,
+          and an attack could be imagined which might either tamper with or replace it. However,
           tampering would require physical capture and substantial disassembly
           of the satellite, which is detectable and would result in the deletion
           of onboard keys, resulting in a tampered-with satellite being easily
@@ -544,15 +583,14 @@
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          An attacker could opt to attempt to disable, capture, or destroy a
-          satellite altogether - after all, if you want to assume that truly no
-          adversary is off the table, you could choose to consider even the use
-          of anti-satellite weapons. However, an attacker trying to make the
+          If you truly want to assume that <i>no</i> attacker is off the table, then
+          an attacker could opt to attempt to disable, capture, or destroy a
+          satellite altogether. However, an attacker trying to make the
           network truly unusable would need to destroy or disable not just one
-          satellite, but the entire constellation, and any replacement
-          satellites, and to do so in a way which obscured their involvement, a
-          daunting task even for the largest possible adversaries. This type of
-          attack is also immediately obvious (especially if the satellite is
+          satellite, but the bulk of the constellation, and any replacement
+          satellites, and, presumably, would wish to do so in a way which obscured
+          their involvement, a daunting task even for the largest possible adversaries.
+          This type of attack is also immediately obvious (especially if the satellite is
           physically destroyed, resulting in the generation of orbital debris),
           and even this still does not result in an actual compromise
           (geolocation, identification, etc.) of FemtoStar users.
@@ -572,4 +610,16 @@
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diff --git a/src/routes/free-open-source/+page.svelte b/src/routes/free-open-source/+page.svelte
index 5d07a1d..f530fb0 100644
--- a/src/routes/free-open-source/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/free-open-source/+page.svelte
@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@
       <p>
         From the user terminal, to the spacecraft, to the ground station,
         FemtoStar is powered by free and open-source hardware and software, and
-        we don't just mean the high-level stuff. Notably, in a world first for
-        wide-area communications networks, even the FemtoStar air interface and
-        the low-level radio firmware implementing it will be free and
+        we don't just mean the high-level stuff. Notably, in what we believe to be
+        a world first for wide-area communications networks, even the FemtoStar
+        air interface and the low-level radio firmware implementing it will be free and
         open-source software.
       </p>
       <p>
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@
         effective as a piece of open infrastructure - you can build on top of
         it, or integrate it into your own products and services. It's what gives
         FemtoStar the flexibility to work just as well as an internal backup
-        network for a business as it does as a portable mobile internet
-        terminal.
+        network for a business or a low-data-rate M2M service as it does as a 
+        mobile internet hotspot service.
       </p>
       <p>
         It also allows our users to verify our claims about privacy and
diff --git a/src/routes/global-open-infrastructure/+page.svelte b/src/routes/global-open-infrastructure/+page.svelte
index 43ef478..a305cfa 100644
--- a/src/routes/global-open-infrastructure/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/global-open-infrastructure/+page.svelte
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
     <TalkingPointContent>
       <p>
         Like any satellite communications system, FemtoStar uses a network of
-        satellites to allow communications between terminals on earth.
+        satellites to allow communications between terminals on Earth.
         Traditional communications satellites - both those that act as simple
         repeaters, and those with onboard routing - fundamentally work by
         shuffling data to and from user terminals via a separate,
@@ -25,23 +25,23 @@
         FemtoStar breaks this distinction. All user hardware can be used both to
         connect to and to operate services, directly via the satellites. There
         are no special "feeder" links, and no prior arrangement with FemtoStar
-        is required to operate a service. Credit processing takes place
+        is required to operate a service. Credit Token processing takes place
         on-satellite, and works even when no official ground station is
         available.
       </p>
       <p>
-        FemtoStar is also developing FemtoStar Real-Time Core Services (RTCS),
+        The FemtoStar Project is also developing FemtoStar Real-Time Core Services (RTCS),
         an open standard for basic communications services such as internet
         access over the FemtoStar network. RTCS is intended to provide a global
-        baseline in FemtoStar-based service, and will be supported by all of our
-        own ground stations. We encourage RTCS adoption at third-party ground
-        stations
+        baseline in FemtoStar-based service, and will be supported by every ground
+        station operated by FemtoStar Inc. We encourage RTCS adoption at all third-party ground
+        stations.
       </p>
 
       <p>
         It's not just services either - the FemtoStar terminal will be released
         as an open standard, with an open-hardware reference design, and
-        FemtoStar will work with third-party terminal manufacturers to license
+        FemtoStar Inc. will work with third-party terminal manufacturers to license
         third-party terminals for use on the FemtoStar network.
       </p>
     </TalkingPointContent>
diff --git a/src/routes/privacy-by-design/+page.svelte b/src/routes/privacy-by-design/+page.svelte
index 73fefa8..29dd834 100644
--- a/src/routes/privacy-by-design/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/privacy-by-design/+page.svelte
@@ -40,15 +40,15 @@
           up the connection or handling a moving user. FemtoStar takes advantage
           of a unique combination of cautious protocol design, low-level terminal-side
           mitigations, and the inherent properties of satellites to ensure that the
-          location of terminals cannot be determined accurately.
+          location of user terminals never needs to be, and in fact cannot be, determined accurately.
         </li>
         <li>
           <b>End-to-end encrypted</b> - While most modern communications systems
           encrypt traffic over the air, FemtoStar goes a step further. FemtoStar
           user traffic is end-to-end encrypted, meaning not even the satellite itself
           can decrypt it. What's more, connections are direct - from user, to satellite,
-          to service. Unless you're connecting to a service we provide, our ground
-          infrastructure never handles your data even in an encrypted form. This
+          to service. If you're not connecting to a service we provide, our ground
+          infrastructure never handles your data at all - encrypted or not. This
           also makes FemtoStar inherently net-neutral - after all, if we can't even
           decrypt your traffic, we can't selectively limit or throttle it either.
         </li>
@@ -56,11 +56,12 @@
           <b>Private payments</b> - An anonymous system isn't truly anonymous if
           users must still provide identifying information in order to pay for service.
           FemtoStar's payment system is simple, flexible, and above all, private.
-          User terminals provide service tokens as they consume service. These tokens
-          can be bought, stored, sold, used, or transferred freely by the user. They
-          are not tied to any account or identity, they do not need to be purchased
-          directly from FemtoStar, and they never expire. Service is priced by satellite
-          resources consumed, not by time or data usage, so you won't be charged
+          User terminals provide cryptographic Credit Tokens to the satellite as they consume service. These tokens
+          can be bought, stored, used, or transferred freely by the user. They
+          are not linked to any form of user identity, they do not need to be purchased
+          directly from FemtoStar, and they never expire (when a satellite validates one,
+          it doesn't even know when it was generated!). Service is priced by satellite
+          resources (beam time) consumed, not by connection duration or data usage, so you won't be charged
           more for staying connected for longer or for connecting with a faster terminal.
         </li>
       </ul>